Turquoise have been working hard to create some superstar sentences for their story.
In Turquoise this week, we have created the ending to the story of The Iron Man. We came up with some great ideas - many of them included an Iron Lady or a mysterious island! First, Miss Humbles gave us some simple sentences that were really boring! We improved them by adding conjunctions, powerful vocabulary, punctuation, similes, alliteration and a range of sentence starters!
When we had to write our endings, we used all of our best ideas and are very proud of the results! Please ask us which sentences we are most proud of!